Saturday, February 28, 2015

This is it! Final results, and the announcement of the winner of the Hot-Off!

Here we are at the end of what has been a really marvelous experience for me, and, I hope, for all of you. Now I get to keep you in suspense as long as I can, while you read my envoi.

First, I want to salute the writers, and in particular the four semi-finalists. I think they've all shown that their work deserves a much longer look than they were able to provide here, so in addition to the links to the story-posts in which their Hot-Off stories appeared that you can find in earlier posts on this blog, I'm going to set you up right now with links to where you can find them elsewhere on the 'net.

The semi-finalists:

Tara Crescent is a writer of erotic fiction. She believes in sassy submissives, firm Dominants, completely consensual relationships and happily-ever-afters! Her favorite kind of romance stories are ones that are somewhat believable. In her spare time, Tara reads, gardens, cooks, and procrastinates about cleaning. She lives in Toronto. She is somewhat active on Facebook and Twitter, especially when the writing is going poorly. Her books are available on Amazon--click here!

Justine Hollander was a die-hard east coaster, until the Pacific Northwest called to her and she never looked back. Erotic literature, from the classics to the lesser known, have interested and excited her over the years, eventually inspiring her to put pen to paper. She hopes her stories both entertain and encourage future authors to do the same. Her first story, ‘Rock and Water”, can be found on the erotic literature website, Literotica. With other members of The Erotic Collective, she currently has two novellas within anthologies that can be found on Amazon--click here!

Will LaForge loves to write, but he's terrible at finishing projects. One day, in the not too distant future, he will finish some of the assorted work-in-progress projects he has going concurrently. When that happens, he will share with you all the mystical places, eclectic characters and wondrous worlds his imagination has created.

Etta Stark is an enthusiastic writer and reader of romantic spanking fiction. She writes the kinds of books that she enjoys reading herself - historical romances with strong characters and proper plotlines in between all the delicious spankings.

The other very, very worthy authors:

Sessha Batto turned to writing full time after a twenty year stint in video production editing, scripting and creating motion graphics. Her first novel Strength of Will is currently being edited for re-release. Her short story Wintersong is included in Dancing in the Dark: An Anthology of Erotica. Her Celtic fairy tale Amadan na Briona is part of eightcuts gallery's Once Upon a Time in a Gallery exhibit. Her short story The Poetry Game is included in New Sun Rising:Stories for Japan, an anthology for tsumani relief. Originally from Belfast, she lives in the States with her husband, son, very old cat and too many swords.

Livia Grant loves to write hot, edgy romances that tend to break a few rules. Her stories tend to showcase ensemble casts, complex relationships and steamy, erotic scenes. Visit her at www.liviagrant.com to learn more.

Kiki Howell: Ever since she was young, Kiki could spend hours lost in a book, and soon she knew that creating lives, loves, and losses with just words had to be the greatest thing that she could do. She’s had over forty stories published, and could not be more grateful to see her creations polished and out in the real world. In May, 2011, Kiki was chosen as an Ohioana Book Festival author for her novel, Torn Asunder. Her novels Hidden Salem and What Lies Within Us have made several Amazon Top 100 Bestsellers Lists such as Paranormal, Suspense and Occult Horror.

Phoenix Johnson is an Australian author who has always had the passion for the written word. She had her nose in at least one book ever since she could read and would even scrutinize the back of the cereal box every morning at breakfast. It was only natural she take up writing.

JS Morbius is the pseudonym of an engaged father to nine children, four of his own and five step-children. He is also partially disabled, having been born with a neurological condition that has caused his nervous system to deteriorate over the years and finds writing to be the way to express his feelings, and fantasies.

Meredith O'Reilly is the author of Little Samantha's Choice. She loves writing, and always has. She mostly enjoy writing romance stories: there's just something special about a couple finally getting their happily ever after. When she's not writing, she tends to be reading or studying for her current classes.

Adaline Raine is an avid reader of spanking romance and is known for reviewing every book she touches! Her latest release is The Medic of Brighton Creek.

Nya Rawlyns is a writer, editor and hopeless romantic. She's lived on a sailboat on the Chesapeake Bay, ridden more than 1000 miles in trail competitions on horseback, and been owned by two Newfoundlands. She's staff for a herd of cats and a herd of horses. She's never met a potato chip she didn't like and she weight lifts - which is probably fortuitous as she really like potato chips. She loves happy endings, even when she has to make them up. Optimist by day and by night...

Sarah Young is a 31 year old wife in her 5th year of marriage trying to figure out what submission really looks like... no, not for you, not for the world, what it looks like for her and HER man.

And the faithful non-competing judges who gave of their time merely to help a hot cause:

Blakely Bennett is the author of the erotic romance Bound by Your Love Series (Stuck In Between, Bittersweet Deceit, & Blue Persuasion plus many more novels to come)​​,​ & c​o-author of the contemporary romance, The Demarcation of Jack.

Salena Jo Day lives in the suburbs of Washington DC. She has a less than exciting day job but loves to balance it out with some spicy romance in her free time. She is inspired by all the folks who are able to put their delicious fantasies into words and share with the world.

Patricia Green is a full-time fiction writer specializing in erotic romance. She writes love stories that emphasize fun characters with quirky personalities. Patricia is the author of more than 20 published novels and novellas. In her personal life, Patricia is married and the mother of twins. When she’s not being the angel of domestic harmony and a semi-crazed creator of fictional friends, she loves to read, crochet, knit and watch hockey.

Pink Amazon is a mysterious, but very pleasant, personage.

Gina Kincade's Naughty Nights Press specializes in creating scandalously daring, virtually dangerous, erotic romance books in multiple digital formats. Their Authors will take you to the ultimate edge of scorching hot reading. They are the gateway to your pleasurable erotic romance reading. NNP has a multitude of established, and newer authors who can't wait to share their wickedly exotic, and sinfully naughty stories for your ultimate reading pleasure.

And now, the results!

In the first semi-final match, between Tara Crescent and Will LaForge, the judges voted as follows:
  • Judge 1: Ooh, so hard to choose both stories are super hot! But story 1 has the edge. It's dialogue was sizzling!
  • Judge 2: Both effectively used the required word, *fork*, but for me number two was just a little more engaging in its heat and suspense.
  • Judge 3: Wow, you were right. Both stories are amazingly hot and deserve to win. I know we only get to pick one though so i think story one had a bit of an edge with me. The scene was sexy and playful with a great ending.
  • Judge 4: Wow!!! Both were scorching hot! I very much enjoyed both stories. These are definitely the hottest yet. I am voting for story one because of the build up to the climax. Nice job to the both of you!
  • Judge 5: Tara and Will, you could not have made this any harder. Both stories were exceptionally written, detailed, and incredibly hot. Both had loving relationships laced with humor. I had to read both of them three times in order to make my decision (i'm not complaining!!). In the end, my vote goes to story two. I truly enjoyed the dialogue between the two of them, not to mention the lovely improvised nipple clamps! When he said, "Get naked, Amy", I shared her full body shiver!
  • Judge 6: Wow. Are you sure that we can't vote for both stories because I would really like that. But, if I have to only chose one I'd chose Story 1. :-) 
  • Judge 7: Voting for Story 1. Hot, a mystery, a game and a happy ending!
  • Judge 8: Both stories used the key word very well, and had a lot of hot elements. I'll vote for Story 1. I found it creative but focused and it didn't rush. The author used his/her word count to get to the punch line without diversion. Kudos to both authors.
Story 1: 6 votes

Story 2: 2 votes

The writer of Story 1 went through to the finals.

In the second semi-final, between Justine Hollander and Etta Stark, the judges voted as follows:
  • Judge 1: I thought it was cute that both stories included dates in the early stages. Both authors did an excellent job of painting the scene, seeming unrushed, and yet not using any unnecessary words. I was very turned on by story number 1, what can I say I'm a spanko. ;-) So, I would vote for 1, but both were excellent!
  • Judge 2: Story 1! That was such a hot spanking scene!
  • Judge 3: Holy moly, those are both hot. I loved the "shall we take this to the bedroom" comment in story one. It was hot, but story two blew me away. So much story packed into 500 little words. The intensity was amazing and chemistry between them so hot. My vote goes to story #2. I'd love to hear more about Paul and Fiona.
  • Judge 4: Oh wow, this is a very difficult decision. Both stories are hot in their own manner, both use the required word, *fork*, and both make me want to read so much more about the potential works behind them! Since I have to vote, though if I had a choice it'd be more of a tie, I'll say number two just because it's a fantasy of my own.
  • Judge 5: Wonderful stories, written by masterful story tellers. This was a really tough choice. I'll go for Story 2. It was punchy, sexy and had an excellent wrapup. Congratulations to both excellent writers.
  • Judge 6: Congrats to both for great stories. I'm really struggling with this one. I think the second story might be slightly better written than the first story, but the first story was really hot. I loved the spanking scene. So close. I'm going with my gut on this one. Story one. Great job to the both of you.
  • Judge 7: These two stories are eminently worthy of the semi-finals of what has been a wickedly entertaining tournament. I extend my congratulations to both authors for making it this far. Story#1 - I love the banter and dialogue between the two characters, I could easily visualize the scene. Use of the word 'fork' was nicely handled because us Americans are definitely wont to switch the fork from our left hand to the right. A spanking as the after dinner dessert worked for me. Story#2 - Hot, hot, hot. The chance encounter of ex-lovers touching hands over a dropped fork was quite creative.The bathroom sex scene could have qualified for a Mile High Club encounter. I vote for Story #2 based on sheer sizzle.
  • Judge 8: Voting for Story 1. I'm a sucker for a little humor in a spicy story. Although I did appreciate the use of 'errant cutlery' in story 2. ;) 
  • Judge 9: Both stories were excellent, but Story 2 had the added dimension of real emotion in it. A happy-ever-after is no easy feat given the word constraints, and I think this story delivered it! I vote for Story 2.
Story 1: 4 votes

Story 2: 5 votes

Story 2 won, in the closest vote of the entire tournament, and its writer went through to the final.

Thus (just to keep the suspense going), A faced Y in the final, and B faced X in the consolation match.

Both those matches happened in this post, and here's how the voting went. Votes with one decision come from the semi-finalists themselves, who of course only voted on the match in which they weren't competing.
  • Judge 1: Match A: Both stories are so good it's really difficult to choose, but the electric chemistry between Julianna and her anonymous Italian lover pushes story 2 ahead. Match B: Wow, both of these stories are fabulous. The twist at the end of story 2 made me smile, but I'm going to have give it to story 1. It had me engrossed from the beginning to the end and I know I'm going to return to it again and again!
  • Judge 2: Whew! Double whew! These writers do not make this choice simple. I'm hot and I want more. My choices are: Match A: Story 1; Match B: Story 1.
  • Judge 3: Match B: This has to be the best round yet, making my decision incredibly difficult. Both stories are so well developed, infused with humor, and sexy as hell. Seriously, I wish I could vote for both of them. While the dialogue in story two was fantastic ("And what needs to be done?" "You." - best lines ever!), my vote goes with story number one. I think the history between them, the slow reveal of her experience with bdsm, and the promise of a new relationship did it for me! That said, fantastic writing, both of you.
  • Judge 4: What a climax! Was it good for you, too? :) Loved all four of these stories. All authors deserve high praise. My vote in Match A goes to story 2. Eccellente lavoro. And for Match B, I'll also vote for story 2. I love the twist at the end. I've really enjoyed being a judge for this Hot Off. Thanks for all the fun reading, authors.
  • Judge 5: Wow, this is the hardest one of them all. Both stories in Match A are so amazing. The first one - it has enough of a sci-fi feel, coupled with glimmers of a back- story - I would be turning the pages, eager to know more. The second story is lovely and relatable - which one of us hasn't wanted to pick up and find magic in a foreign land? A hard, hard choice, but I'm edging towards Story 2. Reading about Juliana's hot Italian guy did a lot of fluttery things to me, and I think that's the definition of what a hot story is supposed to do.
  • Judge 6: For Match A, I chose story 2. For Match B, I chose story 2. Great stories on each match! Great job guys!! :-) 
  • Judge 7: These are by far the hardest match-ups to vote on. Stellar writing to all of you. As far as I'm concerned you are all winners. Very hot stuff. But since I do have to vote... For Match A I choose story ONE because the BDSM elements were scorching hot! Both were great! For Match B I choose story ONE but I must say, they both had plenty of cheek and humor. Well done.
  • Judge 8: Match B - I salute both authors for their outstanding, well-written stories. Wow, this is a tough decision. I've re-read each story three times and I like them both almost equally. The BDSM scene in Story 1 got me going and I liked the twist at the end. Story 2 had the naughty aspect of the Boss Lady getting it on with the intern, nicely done. Decisions, decisions. I cast my vote for Story 1 - the flogging scene is near and dear to my heart.
  • Judge 9: In both matches, Story 2 is the hottest for me--the illicit flings, dangerous places as far as getting caught, the quickies always do it for me.
  • Judge 10: Emily was right. This week all four stories deserve to win. All were hot. All kept readers guessing with good surprises in them. All were unique. I've gone back to re-read a couple of times trying to decide and I am going to say in match one I think story two edged out story one slightly. The danger of getting caught. The hot, Italian guy and they couldn't even speak the language. What a great vacation that must have been. :) For Match two, I am going to say story one was the top one for me, but by a hair. I loved the twist of having Courage be the CEO and the guy be an intern (very naughty of her to do that with her employee) but story one clicked with me. She had been following him, going to the club and now they finally connected. Congrats to all of the finalists. You all deserve kudos.
So the tally is as follows:

Match A: Story 1: 2 votes; Story 2: 6 votes.

Match B: Story 1: 6 votes; Story 2: 3 votes.

Have I dragged this out enough, now? Time for the big reveal?

In Match B, the consolation round, Tara Crescent (Story 1) faced Etta Stark (Story 2). Tara finishes in third place and Etta in fourth. Congratulations to both of them, and many thanks for their four incredible stories!

In Match A, the finals, Will LaForge (Story 1) met Justine Hollander (Story 2). Will takes second-place honors. Many thanks to him for his incredible stories.

Justine Hollander wins the first (maybe annual) Hot-Off! Massive congratulations and wild applause to her, together with enormous gratitude for four verifiably smoking stories! Justine wins a featured spot on Selena Kitt's blog, and at least a year's worth of bragging rights!

Saturday, February 7, 2015

Round 2, Match D results!

With this post, we have our four semi-finalists!

Here are the Match D stories, in case you missed them.

  • Judge 1: Oh wow! Both stories are good so this one is a tough call. I do, however, vote for story 2 for packing a tad more of the evasive heat without even truly putting it out there! *fans self*
  • Judge 2: I vote for story 2. Why? Because the writer "shows" instead of just "telling." I don't care if the sex was hot. Tell me why, and how, and how far. And leave me with that sense of "what the fuck just happened"?
  • Judge 3: This one was very close for me, but I found story one just slightly ahead. Good job. My vote is for story one.
  • Judge 4: More great writing. Kudos to both authors. I'll vote for Story 1. It was fun, and I liked the twist at the end.
  • Judge 5: Two more nice stories. Both were sexy and elements of surprise, but I think I liked the story arc of the first story better. I liked the idea of them having such explosive chemistry together that Nick would drive through the night just to see her again. My vote goes to story one.
  • Judge 6: Once again, a difficult decision. Both stories were well written and full of humor. While story two once again demonstrated the devotion Xander and Michael have for each other (I loved getting a part two to their story!), my vote goes to story one for the surprise twist that they were new lovers. Very sexy!
  • Judge 7: Fabulous - another round with two more great stories. I salute both authors for their excellent work. Story 1 has plenty of heat and a smidgen of BDSM. My favorite line is - “Now let’s get the rest of those clothes off you so I can give you the spanking that you almost certainly deserve." He quickly figured out the way to her sex is to spank her ass. Story 2 - Is a continuation of one of the author's earlier Hot-Off submissions and I'm impressed with how she tied the two stories together. I expected there to be some repeat sex in the elevator, but the tease was still nicely done. It's a tough decision and I don't have a clear reason, but I vote for Story 1.
  • Judge 8: Voting for story 2. Very hot. I love the theme of keeping an established relationship spicy!

Story 1: 5 votes
Story 2: 3 votes

Etta Stark, author of Story 1, goes through to the the semis! Many, many thanks to Sessha Batto for another wonderful story! Look for the first semi-final round, between Tara Crescent and Will LaForge, in a just a little while!

Friday, January 30, 2015

Round 2, Match C results

Things keep getting tenser, and hotter. Only one match to go in this round, and then we'll have our four semi-finalists!

Here are the Match C stories, in case you missed them.
  • Judge 1: These stories are both excellent and hot. Really hot. It's hard to choose one over the other. I'll go with Story 1, though Story 2 was wonderful. I like the twist at the end of Story 1. It's wry and clever. Great work on the part of both authors. I wish I could vote for everyone!
  • Judge 2: As always, I'm pleased by the quality of writing in both stories. Story one left me wanting more. My vote is for story one. Great job!
  • Judge 3: What great stories this week. Story two felt unique to me with several unexpected components (F/F, beauty salon, photography) and I enjoyed the visuals it provoked. I am voting for story one because it really had everything I am looking for in these short stories. It grabbed me right from the start and did a great job of leading the reader to the excitement happening in that car. The end comment/twist was a perfect ending to a sexy story. Great job to both authors, but my vote goes to story one.
  • Judge 4: I loved story 1 - hot, hot, hot! Gorgeous word imagery with the red sign of the hotel flashing in rhythm with Dave's mouth. Story 2 was fun as well, but in the hotness department, I'm going to go with story 1.
  • Judge 5: Wow. Fantastic. Outstanding. Every round so far has gifted us with great stories, but this round is my favorite. I tip my hat to both authors - simply outstanding. Story 1 is absolutely dripping with heat. I really like the way the author gave us a sizzling opening scene, a middle that provided the back-story and then looped back at the end for the 'climax'. Excellent. Story 2 drew me in and sent my imagination whirling. I know someone who could be Cora and I could visualize her making the same verbal gaffes. This story was engaging and left me wondering if Cora would take the bait and find out what else Zoey could do with her hands. Zoey actually reminded me of a character from the TV show - 'The L Word'. This is a tough decision and I debated on flipping a coin to decide, but I vote for Story 2. I liked the what happens next ending...??
  • Judge 6: Both stories are quite hot, though I find story 1 to be a little less about the implied sex and more about the hot and heavy - which worked its magic. My vote is for story 1.
  • Judge 7: While I loved the tease of Story 2, as far as hotness, Story 1 had it and then a tease.
  • Judge 8: Voting for Story 1. I love how the relationship took a little time to develop. I also liked the unexpected theme that ran through the story. Story 2 was well written and had interesting developments.

Story 1: 7 votes

Story 2: 1 vote

Justine Hollander, author of Story 1, goes through to the the semis! Many, many thanks to Adaline Raine for another wonderful story, and many thanks to the judges!

Friday, January 23, 2015

Round 2 Match B results

As far as I can tell, the stories in the Hot-Off just keep getting better! In case you missed it, here's the story post. http://hotoffstories.blogspot.com/2015/01/round-2-match-b-tara-crescent-vs-kiki.html

  • Judge 1: Story 1 was super duper hot! I loved the focus being turned around to be about  Mistress Maeve's fantasy!
  • Judge 2: Story 1 is hot right off the mark. Story 2 is intriguing, makes you wonder, think. It's a difficult choice because both stories are so well done, both are an enjoyable read, and both pack some heat in their individual, and quite different ways. As one who prefers a bit more of the straight up and out there, my vote goes to story 1 for its incredible hotness!
  • Judge 3: Both stories were excellent this week. And, as Emily pointed out, quite different. It's very hard to choose which one to vote for, but I'll choose #2. I enjoyed the word-pictures, the graceful flow of the prose, and the misty sexuality. I wish there was more!
  • Judge 4: Both stories are well written. Story 1 really got my juices flowing though. My vote is for Story 1.
  • Judge 5: This was a really hard choice but story one because of the lively dialogue. Story two is very, very well written and descriptive. Story one just pushed all my buttons. Great job!
  • Judge 6: Oh my goodness... Two stories that quickly drew me in and made me want more. Both were exceptionally written. My vote goes with story number one. While story two was rich in atmosphere and romance, story one was playful, sexy, and the promise of kinky night of mfm excites the hell out of me! Bravo to both authors
  • Judge 7: Voting for Story 1. It was very naughty - I liked it. Story 2 was very descriptive, visual and well written.
  • Judge 8: Both stories, while very different in style, were excellent. The second story was unique and held a poetic beauty in the words and images it provoked. Still, I believe I enjoyed story one better. It was faster paced with a full story thread that kept me looking forward to what was coming. The chemistry between characters was even there, a hard thing to do with 500 words. I'm voting for story one.
  • Judge 9: Wow, another tough choice. Brava to both of this round’s authors - exceptional job Ladies. I found myself aroused by the content of Story 1 and could easily picture the characters and setting(s), as well as empathize with their described feelings. I liked Story 2 for its creativity and ability to stir my emotions. I love the notion of a ghostly entity revisiting the location of a love making scene. I've felt that way, when I am revisiting a place where I've been with someone before and it's like standing outside yourself, watching as an observer, remembering... With much back and forth over-thinking, I choose Story 1 for the BDSM aspect and the heat factor.
  • Judge 10: Both stories were great, but I had to chose Story 1. I love the idea of a Domme, even if she is being submissive for a time. 

Story 1: 9 votes
Story 2: 1 vote

Tara Crescent, author of Story 1, goes through to the third round--the semis! The judges were unanimous, and I agree wholeheartedly, that Kiki Howell's story was absolutely wonderful. It made me want to give a special award for emotion evoked in a hot context. Many thanks to Kiki for two incredible stories in Rounds 1 and 2!

Friday, January 16, 2015

Round 2, Match A results

Round 2 started off with two amazing stories, and the voting was correspondingly close!

  • Judge 1: Both stories were incredibly hot but I have to go with story one because it is more creative. I love that the couple is engaging in super steamy acts and unknowingly being exobishionists with a man stroking his cock on the other side of the wall. It adds another level to their playful passion, with just a tiny amount of creep. The second story is great but it's typical. She's getting punished, he's spanking her, then they are having sex... just doesn't stand out enough for me. Well done authors!
  • Judge 2: I enjoyed both stories. I loved the love and connection of Robert and Julianna in story two. It was a good scene, but I think I'm voting for story 1 because of it's unique angle of having it at the Bates hotel and having Norman as a creepy voyeur. It had me guessing what was coming next and wrapped up as a nice little mini story. My vote goes to story one.
  • Judge 3: The stories this week were of very similar quality and kinkiness, though the plots were utterly different. I'll place my vote for story #1. I found it very clever and twisty.
  • Judge 4: Fantastic start to round two, both stories original and well written. Story one gets my vote. Norman Bates' lust leapt from the page and into my heart!
  • Judge 5: Both stories are intriguing, and both clearly use the required word, *hotel*, but it's my opinion story two meets the heat just a little more. 
  • Judge 6: Two hot stories! If I had to pick, I'd pick story 1 for the 'I do wonder what's going to happen next' factor.
  • Judge 7: I enjoyed both stories very much. The subject matter of the second was far more appealing to me but I must give it to #1 for the writing style.
  • Judge 8: Honestly, I can't decide! But I guess if going on just hotness, I'd have to go with spanking, Story 2.
  • Judge 9: Voting for story number 2. I do love me some Daddy! Impressive that the story was both hot and playful in 500 words. I was totally sucked in.

Story 1: 6 votes
Story 2: 3 votes

Will LaForge, author of the Hitchcockian Story 1, goes through into Round 3 aka the Semi-Finals! Many, many thanks to Meredith O'Reilly for her incredible stories in both Round 1 and Round 2!

Friday, January 9, 2015

Round 1, Match H results

Two wonderful MM stories to finish off the first round! Many thanks for them to Nya and Sessha!

  • Judge 1: Thanks to both authors. The second story really captivated me from the start. I go with Story 2. Great job. 
  • Judge 2: These stories only get more difficult to choose from! Both have that wow factor of hot, hot, hot! The word play in story one caused so much tension to build, while story two was descriptive and clear, almost as if it'd picked up where story one left off, in a way. As hard as this is, there's just something about story one that says, "choose me," so number one it is!
  • Judge 3: I'm voting for Story 2. Both stories were very hot and well done. But, I preferred story 2 because of the tenderness in it. I think it's so sweet that one partner was helping out the other one get over his fear of elevators. :-)
  • Judge 4: Story One was well written but it was too scary for me to read and I just couldn't finish it. It was too much for me. Sorry. Story Two on the other hand was hot and had an amazing ending. I love that it was his partner/boyfriend the whole time. Very well written! Both authors can do wonders with just 500 words!
  • Judge 5: I'm almost speechless, which believe it or not, doesn't happen to me often. Wow, these two stories sent a rush straight from overwhelmed brain straight to my groin. Kudos to both authors for these well written shorts. Story 1 is cloaked in mystery and intrigue. There is so much going on I had to re-read the story a third time to pick up little nuances I missed the first time. I was left with a huge craving to read more and find out what the heck happened next. Bravo. Story 2 was pure heat and I loved the surprise ending. The scene in a glass elevator was extremely erotic and I'm sure a LOT of people have entertained the fantasy of elevator sex. What an innovative way to cure a phobia and I applaud the author for creativity. It's a tough decision, but I vote for Story 2 based on pure heat. The sex in an elevator fantasy is a personal fav of mine.
  • Judge 6: I feel what was left vague in Story 1 made it hotter, as the mind went where the mind wanted to go, leaving the reader a bit breathless with their own desires.Sometimes, it's what not said, I guess.
  • Judge 7: Voting for Story 2. I love that it was an established relationship and still hot!
  • Judge 8: I liked the imagery of the first story. I enjoyed the second story more. I could feel the fear of the elevator and the short scene was a cute glimpse into their relationship. Loved the loathing comment. My vote goes to story two.
  • Judge 9: Such amazing stories to wrap up Round one. Story one was incredibly unique in both writing and content - fear, arousal and shame leapt from the page leaving me unsettled and in awe. Story two gets my vote though, for both the impeccable writing and the flow of the story. Again, the descriptions detailed his fear and excitement exquisitely, and what first appears to be non-con is suddenly a love story. Not a big fan of the 'death box' myself - I might have to look into this particular brand of therapy.


Story 1: 2 votes
Story 2: 7 votes

Sessha Batto, author of story 2, goes through into round 2! Congratulations to both writers for such incredible stories, and for making the judges lives so difficult. Many thanks as always to the judges for their thoughtful comments.

Friday, January 2, 2015

Round 1, Match G results

I have to say that when I decided to take the plunge and try organizing this thing, I had no idea just how good the stories were going to be! Yet another week with two fantastic stories, and we've still got one more match to go in the first round!

  • Judge 1: I feel like a judge on American Idol where every contestant is a potential super star. Reading these stories is like opening a box of chocolates, I never know what I'm going to get, just that every story will be good.This round was just good as all the previous ones, both stories are well written and they drew me in. Story 1 brought me to attention right way with the morning after one-night stand intro and I was able to easily visualize the scene. The dialogue was engaging and left me wanting to know about what happened next when the spanking started. Story 2 made me laugh aloud at the image of the Dominant with mashed potatoes dripping down his face. My next reaction was one of incredulity that the submissive in the story would react in such a way. I immediately wanted to know about their relationship and the boundaries they'd agreed to. All of my reactions made the story a fun read. In the end, my vote goes to Story 1. Story 1 left me wanting to know more about the couple.
  • Judge 2: I'm going to go with Story 1 because in this instance, comparing the two stories, the fun of it made it hotter, the subject matter didn't require the depth of character that the subject matter of Story 2 required but just wasn't capable of within a 500 word limit.
  • Judge 3: Both very hot stories, loved them both. Voting for story number two because it was hot and included some humor as well.
  • Judge 4: Both stories this week excelled in character development despite the constraint of 500 words. My vote goes to story number one, though, for making me squirm and leaving me wishing for so much more.
  • Judge 5: I'll vote for story 1. I find wild monkey sex (even in the past tense) to be pretty hot. The story was well-written, with good character development, despite the short length. I enjoyed their by-play and the way he teased her about the dungeon. Story 2 was also well-written. I anticipated the way the scene would go, and sometimes that's comforting.
  • Judge 6: This was torture, plain and simple. Both stories were SOOOO good! Why am I being forced to choose?! Seriously, if it were up to me, this would be called a tie because each story was equally well written. But, since this is a contest, I have to pick Story 1. Story 2 was so fantastic too! I especially loved the cuddle scene after her punishment. To both authors, these stories were very well written! :-)
  • Judge 7: Oh wow.... I honestly don't know which one to pick. Story 1 is just incredibly hot with the mention of a night filled with sex and not much getting to know you along with the new intrigue of a cane and her ass but Story 2 is so witty! I love that the heroine has thrown mashed potatoes and wound up in the corner about to be getting a very sore bottom. My goodness... I don't know which one to pick. I have to vote for Story 2....the tenderness there and his caring for her won me over. Two very very good stories. Well done, authors!
  • Judge 8: Such decisions. Both were hot and exciting. I would be happy with either one winning, but I think I'll go with story #1 with my vote. Great job ladies.
  • Judge 9: Both stories were great! Both contained the *hot* bdsm element, and both had the promise of so much more heat yet to come. This made it truly a hard choice, however, I will vote for number two as just slightly more - made so by some very vivid descriptions. I could literally *see* what was occurring. Nicely done!
  • Judge 10: These both were great but I really found story one to be fun AND hot! Story 1 for me. Thanks!

Story 1: 7 votes
Story 2: 3 votes

Etta Stark, author of Story 1, goes on to Round 2! Thanks so much to Sarah, for a wonderful, wonderful story, and to the indefatigable judges for their votes and comments.

The stories for the final Match of Round 1 will go live at 1AM Eastern US time tomorrow!